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On Wings of Steel - Chapter 18
🕑 Added 2020-09-13 19:45:11 +0000 UTCDamn, I was hoping to have this chapter done last Sunday but I spent the better part of this week tweaking it back and forth. I'm still not happy how it turns out. The flow is awkward and I don't think I managed to deliver the tension I was going for.
Anyway, I either put it out or keep it to myself forever so here goes nothing.
I hope you like it better than I do
Comments
Neoalfa
Hi. There is no set schedule. I put one up a poll after I publish the chapters from the previous poll. Every Patron can vote, but the value of each vote is determined by your tier. As a $5 Patron, your vote counts five points.
DraconianGreed
Um, is there like a set schedule for polls and do all patrons get to vote or only the higher payers?
Sarnon
Any chance you can put the next poll up quickly? I kind of want the next chapter and I get the feeling that more people will vote for this with a cliffhanger fresh in mind. #PollManipulationIsFun
Neoalfa
Yeah, I know. I could have kept going but the fight and the immediate aftermath are going to be at least one chapter's worth of content and if I wrote it it would have taken me another week at best to go anywhere. I preferred to cut it off right there so that I can work better on the second part.
Parker Maisterra
I see what you mean by flow being awkward. The end of the chapter didn't actually feel like the end to a chapter and instead felt like a random cut off point.
Jason
Was there a reason you ended that where you did? It wasn’t a cliffhanger, it just stopped in a strange place. Also was very short...
V01D
Could you save these to someplace like Dropbox, rather than Mega - so they are more accessible?
Obsessivehobbyist
I thought the chapter was great! We are really starting to see just what it means to have Shirou participating in the Sekirei Plan. Can expect many tears to follow.
