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Grrl Power #488 - Patreon 2x
🕑 Added 2016-12-29 11:05:00 +0000 UTC Thank you and enjoy!
Comments
Bryce Maryott
If there are two doors, there are possibly (probably) more, especially with the size of the crowd that was in there.
Julie Nichols
I'm pretty sure that Sydney's reaction in the last panel is an exact match for mine. lol
David Houghton
Isn't the door in pretty good shape for being blown up? Or is that a back entrance? (Edit: can claim it to be the door from 479, so probably that.)
Simon Magid
To add to the choir of anal-retentiveness, first panel's "force us in to the open" should probably be "force us _into_ the open".
Dave Barrack
Fixed!
Dave Barrack
One of them is light blue and has no pupil.
Erin Palette
Since we're getting picky about grammar, there also ought to be a colon after "ago".
Stephen Gilberg
Or just "one weapon."
Justaguy
Yeah Panel 3's Maxima dialogue is very off somewhere.
Phil Boswell
I take it there's supposed to be something bizarrely off about this new arrival's eyes?
Tim
Panel #4, Maxima "one *type* of weapon".
