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Grrl Power #740 - Patreon 2x

🕑 Added 2019-05-30 10:05:01 +0000 UTC

Comments

Churchill (formerly TeaBear)

Honestly, I still miss the traditional comic-book blacks. But your art continues to get more and more amazing.

Nutter with a pencil.

Those skin tones are looking a lot better.

Beechwood Chip

Wait - Sydney "died" after she accidentally teleported, and she told Maxima that she "died", so I assumed that she told Maxima about accidentally teleporting in a debrief held off camera. Maxima had an untrained recruit "die" under her command, so she would have asked questions, and I can't imagine any way... OK, I can imagine Sydney saying "I was there on the roof looking through the remote, I found Pixil, and then I was there in the roof before Pixil left. "

Jared Juetten

I love Max's face in panels 2, 7, and 9. Nailed it!! Keep up the great work, Dave!

Foradain

Or lose the "have", to make it "We need strategies in place".

Damaged

"we need have strategies" You'll want a "to" in there. Love the work!

Julie Nichols

Ooo...I don't think I realized she hadn't told Max about the teleport feature yet.

PSadlon

Ding Ding Ding

PSadlon

She kinda accidentally figured out how to use teleport via the telepresence orb the mission to find Sciona, when she was attempting a lower risk lower option sneak & speak. Probably though it best not to outshine your commander power-wise especially since she had planned to avoid using that power again unless absolutely necessary since it worked out poorly for her the first time.