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Grrl Power #861 - Patreon 2x

🕑 Added 2020-07-27 10:00:04 +0000 UTC
Grrl Power #861 - Patreon 2x

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Foradain

I'm expecting that, once Sydney overcomes her OCD enough to let her ADHD really work for her, her times will be semi-respectable on this course.

Richard Riley

It turns out, from commentary on the main page redirecting attention to the "gum" and the under-comic comment, that Seneca is actually popping a root beer candy UP into her mouth. Dave could easily add motion-lines going from the candy indicating it is travelling FROM the hand rather than from the mouth as many of us thought. Also, the cross-eyed is a bit overkill, and the head would traditionally be tilted back a bit as you usually toss the candy up, then let gravity pull it down into your mouth... unless you're miss hot-shot I suppose.

Churchill (formerly TeaBear)

Max would probably have to wait for each target to pop up, substantially slowing her time. :D

AlpineBob

@just about everybody... It is <i>supposed</i> to make you think it is Sydney, until the reveal in panel 7 (skin tone). The trouble is, most of us don't pay that much attention to skin tone. I didn't get it either until the dialogue box. Maybe it would help if panel eight were <i>Syd</i> spitting out <i>her</i> gum in amazement, instead of Seneca looking unconcerned and un-winded...but really the dialogue is enough.

AlpineBob

Maxima is allowed to use super-speed? Then probably faster not to use a gun at all! Go! ::Maxima pushes a finger through the forehead of all targets as they are popping up:: Done!

Richard Riley

...oh, THAT's Seneca? And now I get the full joke, "kick ass and chew bubble-gum." I think this page might want a narrator or something. Really, panel two needed to be a couple frames earlier in the action, so you could see the pony tail, but that's a full panel re-work which isn't going to happen I'd expect.

Evgeny Sandu

Yeah, in the second to last panel it is not really transparent that Seneca has just finished this course. For all we can see she's just.. spitting a gum while being in awe for something?

Martin Nielsen

I did not even notice! Nice!

Richard Riley

It did not even begin to be clear that this wasn't Sydney running the course without goofing off until the "SHE's not supposed to" word bubble. I have high expectations of her prowess...

Enigma42

Yes against huge nightmarish alien monsters not against normal humans

Martin Nielsen

I wonder how she would be without the new glasses. And I wonder how people will react when they learn about the glasses. That said she did get some actual combat experience, soo.


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