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Grrl Power #1227 - The really yucky breath of life
🕑 Added 2024-01-29 11:00:15 +0000 UTCThank you for the support! You guys are awesome!
This page is a tad busy admittedly, but I couldn't resist a little aside back to the base to show Arianna just... aging a little bit each time Sydney's name suddenly gets a bunch of social media hits.
When I look back through the comic, I think the biggest issue with it is the density. Since I want every page to tell it's own little segment of the story, there's no big splash pages (except for like page 100 I think, where Sydney gets dropped off at the base for the first time) or larger establishing panels that showcase new locations. The result is that the visual pacing is kind of homogenous, which is to say, dense, cause every page has 9 plus or minus 2 panels, which is really a lot for a standard comic page. I've considered trying to draw larger panels on occasion to vary to pacing, but then I'd have to post twice as many page, like doing those tall double pages I've used on occasion, in order to have the same amount of story per post. Unfortunately that would almost definitely mean more work for me. Probably not double, but if I used those larger panels for some establishing location shots, it would mean quite a bit more background work, which would benefit the comic I think, but man I am slow at them. And I don't even do very detailed (or good, if I'm honest) backgrounds. Like look at that first panel. No comic shop has bare walls like that. There'd be posters all the way to the rafters, and there's be little displays all over the counters and tent signs and all kinds of visual clutter.
Honestly, when I look at those artist that seem to delight in drawing some anime witch girl sitting in front of a cauldron in some shop with a 4 dozen bookshelves and plants and papers scattered all over the place and a bunch of owls or cats lounging in all the nooks and crannies, I'm like... that's 60 hours of work, right? Drawing all those spellbooks in the shelves, all different heights and widths and some of them canted slightly and the little compasses and vials and jars full of eyeballs or whatever... that has to be like a week and a half of 8-5 work for that one picture, right?
Anyway, that's why Sydney's comic shop is really... uh, tidy.
Comments
Jeff Byrom
All I can add is, love the Community reference!
eddi_TBH
She was treating them as drowning victims. Their engines were running but their lungs needed encouragement.
Aaron Schulz
She should learn CPR, the mouth to mouth part really isnt gonna do anything.
Reigys
just now: What is going on in the background on panel 9 (exhaling breath into brelx)... hmmm
