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16 - A Night with Loona Comic

🕑 Added 2021-08-28 04:07:09 +0000 UTC

Comments

Super Shanko

Hey, Jizoku, feel free to consider/ignore this teeny suggestion, but maybe swap the two lines in the center panel? The flow of the wording looks like it would work better having Moxxie first allude to this new sensation and then followed by his concerns of Loona going too far, thus making him go crazy. Just something to consider before official public release.

Bill Young

Another excellent job on your comic pages this month, Jizoku. This is getting more spicy, keep up the awesome work. 😉👍

Alexis

You could make it all at once and release it in waves. Works for everyone that way🥳

SmilinLeviathan

That center image is just... MMM! 😘

chandler hokes

The smiley face cracks me up

Jizoku

well, I normally work in this way because I like concentrate on a single type of content at once, it is like on 20th I start thinking as comic writer, sketcher and colorist. it's hard for me to jump between different type of artworks. my content would be much slower to make.

Calvin

BOTH!!

MysteriousCat

This is going really great:)

Joshua Steel

Really nifty idea

Super Shanko

I'm at the point of believing this was a setup by either Millie or Blitz.

David Simmons

She is really into him. Lucky guy

Please don't bite this man

Kelsey Yamamoto

Damn this is good keep up the good work👍

Davide Franzoso

Jizoku, I have an idea: this is the third page, so for another month we have to wait. But ... what if you publish a page every 10 days? Same amount of work for you, and we would see a page on the 10th, one on the 20th and one on the 30th, without having to wait for a month! If that's okay with you, take a poll about it, and let's see if the patreons like it too! (ps: obviously, the design is beautiful, congratulations!)