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Chapter 14, Page 28 Layout Sketch
🕑 Added 2020-06-10 20:20:55 +0000 UTCThere's a few noticeable differences here between sketch and finished page. In this sketch, Madison's still wearing her backscatter specs. And, on Panel 3, we see Reena untying the hostages -- this was changed since Madison's "position" in front of them doesn't match the first or last panels on this page (her back is to the smashed wall).
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StLOrca (pronounced Ess Tee Ell Orca)
Dude, just leave that knife where it is. If I may quote Willy Wonka: "I wouldn't do that. I really wouldn't."
A Man with Joe Name
Let me rephrase that, because looking back, when she first bust through the wall, it was boobs everywhere, but now she seems to be covered up?
A Man with Joe Name
I also preferred the NSFW version. :D
