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Chapter 18, Page 28 Layout Sketch
🕑 Added 2021-09-08 17:54:37 +0000 UTCThe only major change here was on Panel 6. Salaiix felt that having Madison abruptly turn away from the "camera" made it look like she was looking at something near the door, instead of walking towards it. In the finished page, the angle is switched, so that Madison turns and is walking towards us.
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Kerotan
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