Chapter 22, Page 58 Layout Sketch
🕑 Added 2024-06-09 04:29:18 +0000 UTCThe bullet impacts went through a few changes. Originally, the bullets were going to make holes in the android--but it was decided that the android's "xetanium" shell should be bulletproof.
Then, in the lineart, we had the bullet impacts done in a more comic/manga style. Salaiix came up with the great idea to show sparks, as if the bullets were ricocheting off.
The impact sparks probably wouldn't look as impressive in black and white but, since DZO's in color, it really adds to the effect on the finished page.
Comments
Donathan Rogers
Itβs still a pretty good job regardless. Hey, do you think that maybe you could one day do a Hentai chapter of Madison wearing just her red jacket over her sexy undergear and wearing a vibrator while doing her rounds with Reena on a night in the town or something? ππ