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Chapter 23, Page 15 Layout Sketch
🕑 Added 2024-10-16 20:10:49 +0000 UTCWe can see a few alternate panels here. Originally, we had a close-up of Siyo on Panel 3--but we felt it was more important to see Mora's indifferent response. Also, we decided to not show Mora eating the grape in Panel 5. Picking one out of the cup seemed more calculating/methodical than just popping it into her mouth right away. Sometimes, it's the little details :)
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Donathan Rogers
This is amazing regardless! Although, I would often imagine this scene as an opening to a tense Masturbation performance between the two in order to ease the tension surrounding Zoeβs murder, but, thatβs just me. ππ
