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Chapter 23, Page 19 Layout Sketch
🕑 Added 2024-10-30 18:32:37 +0000 UTCWe made a couple changes on this page.
In the original sketch, there were more word balloons around Mora in Panel 2, which made it look too cluttered. So we adjusted and moved those.
Art-wise, the only real change was Mora's expression on the final panel, which was redrawn to better fit her dialogue.
