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Chapter 23, Page 22 Layout Sketch
🕑 Added 2024-11-10 21:45:02 +0000 UTCSometimes we run into a really tough choice about which panel to go with, and that definitely happened with the last panel of Page 22.
On Version B, we have the close-up of Reena reacting to Emaly's dialogue. While Version A was a wider shot incorporating more fanservice.
We ended up going with Version B, since it felt like it had more dramatic effect for the scene. But we also couldn't discard Version A--that angle on Emaly's butt was just too good--so we'll be reworking that panel into Page 23 :)
Comments
Donathan Rogers
I would’ve preferred the first choice, but………..
Arella KonEl
good call
