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Puck 489 - The 'Lost' Original Draft
🕑 Added 2019-04-12 02:19:40 +0000 UTCI said I'd post this glimpse at my first draft of Puck 489's last two panels, so here we are. Lots of tiny differences. Nothing too major. Note that I didn't have the original to go from when I was drawing it a second time.
Which ones do you prefer? I think I like the second take of the slap panel but the first take of the final panel better.
Comments
ElectricGecko
I did try to up the shock factor when I redrew it. The first take was a bit too neutral.
ElectricGecko
Yeah, I'm on board with all of those choices. You have a good eye.
ElectricGecko
Well, glad I ended with the right choices, then.
Sylvician
I actually prefer the last version of the second panel, but that is purely because Phoebe's shocked look really tells us how devastated she was of even doing a weak slap.
FuryoftheStars
I agree on the first panel. The second panel, I actually like Phoebe looking at the palm vs back of her hand, but do like Daphne's pose in the first take better (not putting her hand to her cheek).
Philip D Jones
2nd take both panels
