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Puck 505 - Alt Joke
🕑 Added 2019-07-30 02:21:40 +0000 UTCOkay, so my original draft of this comic had basically two jokes and neither totally fit. So I ended up splitting the difference and separating them into two versions. This one is only available here on Patreon.
Honestly, I'm not sure which one is better. I was actually going to run THIS one as the actual comic until a few minutes ago when I changed my mind. I like the joke, but this one is just a little clunky in the text boxes. The other one is a little sleeker, so I went with that. Though this one may legitimately be funnier. I can't tell.
Comments
ElectricGecko
I'm very sorry to hear that. Internet out for a week is a disaster of epic proportions in my household.
ElectricGecko
Well, that's true. I personally like a healthy dose of ambiguity, though...
Donald Lewis King (DLKmusic)
ps... sorry for the late posts, my internet was out all week
Donald Lewis King (DLKmusic)
I think I like this one better too... It's much easier to grasp Hannah's character in this one, and I have a simple mind...
ElectricGecko
I might agree? I might. I don't know. I'm perfectly divided down the middle.
ElectricGecko
I am too. But I always have to be conscious of the fact that we wordy humor fans are in the minority. And comics end up looking crowded when the speech bubbles are too big. So I went with the other one.
ElectricGecko
Mmm. Now I want french toast.
ElectricGecko
Yeah, that's basically my reasoning. This one was funny but clunky.
Philip D Jones
This is funnier.
TOG Driver
I'm on board with this one, but I like wordy humor. (humour?)
LilRuub
Cinnamon?! Now I know why every time I walk past that biker bar I hey a craving for French Toast.
Kevin Wright
This one's good, but yeah, the other one flows better.
