ButcherPete
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Thanks To All Members! Quick Poll!
🕑 Added 2025-06-09 23:39:32 +0000 UTCHey to all fans and readers! Butch here! I just wanted to thank everyone that joined the Patreon! I like to think you readers are the core audience and contributors to this rollercoaster of a story! XD
A Special thanks to all the new contractees that joined to read ahead and offer support! I write this story as a hobby, and I would still do it for free, but you people had to throw money at a wagie. I am now forced to evolve my writing and hotblooded will to make this story the best it can possibly be! I'm not one to let down believers!
That being said, when the final advanced chapters are released, I plan on moving to rewriting the first couple of arcs of the story. I've checked the stats and a few opinions and many seem to find the beginning of the story lacking in grammar, a bit jarring at points, and overall a little too schizo(lol). The story will not change too significantly, but after months of writing this and learning so much I do indeed see the glaring issues XD.
So, I will be taking on the task to slowly evolve the beginning as well and I would like your opinion on what should be focused on first. We will start with the worst rated chappys.(Not the ones that just trigger people just the most poorly written ones) Which would you like to read first on this remaster quest?
Also comment below on any changes, edits, or clarity you would like to see throughout the story!
Thanks again for all the support! And I'm so glad you all are enjoying so far!
Comments
Butch Perterson
I’m not against chapter requests, I was considering adding side stories for tier readers anyways! But can you go into a bit more detail about/ adjust your explanation about what you’re asking for so I can be sure? It’s a bit confusing.
Aune
Chapter request. -a Point of view chapter about The platform's perspective. Like, The dialog are identical , the actions of Hannayh from previous chapters are what's previous written , and for lack of better wording, warped & interpreted through the metaphysical eyes of the Platform whom don't follow the "mortal" thought process, or any template that's Humanoid in nature. Just to be clear, i dearly like your craft so far, so dont let such random 'request' influence ur style, or feel pushed in anyway since this is a message from a paying reader.
