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Chapter 87: Cherrymaid Doctrine

🕑 Added 2025-07-12 02:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Butch Perterson

lol if your on the fence about commenting something just dm it to me. But yes it’s written intentionally to draw parallels to their own past and why they developed laws like that, BUT I WILL BE CLEAR THEY ARE PAIN DEMONS NOTHING ELSE, but the way it’s inflicted on others runs opposite to charm, normal charm at least, but if you don’t like it, I’m not against changing it if you have a suggestion that might convey it in a softer way?

Prent

I’ve been thinking about if I want to say this or not all weekend, and I’ve decided that I should. When I first read this line: “Their abilities weren’t fueled by affection or temptation. They didn’t beckon or seduce. They only forced.” My first thought was “Oh, they’re r**e demons now.” If that’s what you want to imply, then fine, feel free to ignore me, but otherwise, maybe think about changing that line.

Legokill101

holy crap hans and hanya made them stupid op.


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