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Cultivation Nerd: Chapter 91

🕑 Added 2024-05-08 16:00:01 +0000 UTC

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Undead Writer

Thanks for the chapter

WindGunner

It's the one his clan gave him, so not one of the ones from the library

Bonobo

Thanks for the chapter, loved it!

Baconwargod

sky I think

Dwayne Parker

So what’s the level above earth grade called?

Runehkt

Man, sometimes reading fast sucks hahaha.

Robert Adams

It could be that this is the entire army, or perhaps just a large part of it. Afterall, the governor was talking about how Whitehall Town is the largest of the towns in the area and is therefore likely the most powerful in terms of defenders. The beast army/armies could also just be a distraction to draw forces away from the sect so that enemies would have an easier time attacking the sect. We'll just have to wait and see.

Baconwargod

“Training also honed my senses while simultaneously easing my tension. Unlike some, I wasn't cut out for war. No matter how much I tried to adapt, deep down I was the same guy who, in a different life, never had to worry about a war breaking out in his backyard” Me thinks someone is a bit of an unreliable narrator.

lenkite

Are they attacking all the villages with this level of strength ? And also attacking the Sect at the same time ? That level of force - such large numbers - should have been detected by the sect scouts. They either aren't doing their job or are corrupt.

BZD

If only I remembered what a trace was. Alas. And is the technique he used one that was officially completed or was it one of the ones that needed something?

person1357

Boo! cliffhanger boo!!

DuskDeadman

Bet this is a trace

Erik Hansen

Sounds like homeboy just hit a "Trace" with his earth grade technique.

Confused

So Liu was able to perform sword beams or at least dagger beams on his first try! Nothing like life threatening danger to push someone forward.

Slycerr

Yep

Holy Mouse

I was thinking of Ki Blast (from DBZ) when I was writing it. I will think of a better description.

C

What was the Blast from? Blast is typically the result of something exploding, not something you just shoot. The creature's attack is not very clear here IMO.

Isiah Debarros

Sweet

Navdeep Sugandhi

Prose had been weakness of this story, it's good that u are working on it

FillerArc

trace?

Holy Mouse

cacophony — Lol, words like this come out when I try-hard at editing. I've been watching some Creative Writing online classes, and learning from a couple of pro editors. They've been very helpful, and it has helped me improve my editing and writing quite a bit. Though Liu Feng's thoughts will be kept the same. I have already established a 'voice' when it comes to him.


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