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The Sorcerer King - Chapter 7

🕑 Added 2024-04-21 14:53:26 +0000 UTC

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Spooky

Hei just wondering is this on hiatus and is chapter 6 removed?

Elle

Please update again soon! So excited for the next chapter! I hope Harry and Vissera meet soon!

John

Cool! Hope to see some of Viserra. I can imagine once Alyssane finds out Harry’s “small” town isn’t so small lol

Matheus Araujo Sousa

It isn't really a plot hole. Sure, Harry can easily create glass with his magic, but he isnt trying to create a single piece for personal use. What he is trying to do is create an industry for his people to work on. And while magic can be used to create something, it really doesn't give one to knowledge of how that something is made without it.

Matheus Araujo Sousa

I have something planned for the dragons. And that's all I'm going to say on it.

MN01

Ok I'm not sure you meant for this to happen but you've created a plothole. At the begining of the chapter Alysanne explictly states that Sirius created a crystal clear GLASS goblet for her with his magic.... Then toward the end of the chapter he and Harry suddenly can't make glass for some reason (which I don't buy in the least as glass would be simple for HP magic to make I mean come on....) Trying to artifically create problems like that for plot purposes when we are all well aware that HP magic can handle almost all mundane problems if one has the spells for it (which with how simple most of these things are is very likely to be in the massive Library) it just comes off as the author trying to create issues when there shouldn't be any. Unless it involves a uniquely magical problem that is native to Planetos that HP magic can't affect then it would be more plausible for there to be issues but otherwise don't try to tell us that mundane stuff like glass production is too much for HP magic when we see examples of Wizards creating conjured glass items all the time or transfigure it from something else in HP canon.

John

Oh man finally I want to see Harry marry Viserra already lol. I wonder if she will claim a dragon before. Or if Harry will get his own dragon. Hope to see an update soon! Hope everything goes well for you.

travis btmb

Tftc can't wait for more this is one of my favorite harry potter/hotd fics

Lictor Magnus

Welcome back and thanks for the chapter! Pregnancy scares can be rough. Don’t feel bad about your age though. Raising kids is tough. A lot of your peers may have them already but it doesn’t mean they were ready for them or wished they didn’t wait longer.


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