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Pencils for Fallen Chapter One, Page 57
🕑 Added 2021-11-13 06:38:38 +0000 UTCThanks to hitting our very first Milestone Goal, Patrons get to see guest artist Gabriel Mayorga's original pencilwork in addition to the regular updates.
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Alex Woolfson
Yep. Those are all the reasons I asked for the change, QueBijoux. :)
QueBijoux
Plus, word balloons!
QueBijoux
At first, I didn’t like that panel 6 was moved to the bottom. It seemed to crowd the “leaving” scene. Then, I realized that it added punch to Karthak and Pati’s embrace. You feel the loss more with that extra space.