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Pencils for Fallen Chapter One, Page 57

🕑 Added 2021-11-13 06:38:38 +0000 UTC
Pencils for Fallen Chapter One, Page 57

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Alex Woolfson

Yep. Those are all the reasons I asked for the change, QueBijoux. :)

QueBijoux

Plus, word balloons!

QueBijoux

At first, I didn’t like that panel 6 was moved to the bottom. It seemed to crowd the “leaving” scene. Then, I realized that it added punch to Karthak and Pati’s embrace. You feel the loss more with that extra space.


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