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The Young Protectors: Fallen Chapter One—Page 53

🕑 Added 2021-10-30 05:31:26 +0000 UTC
The Young Protectors: Fallen Chapter One—Page 53

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william clapie

Hum. In this case I would think he only needed practice with targeting the beasts. As in, see if they can survive a fall from a few thousand feet. !!!

william clapie

Really? A fan of that bird? Well, different strokes and all that I guess.

Alex Woolfson

Still, Cory feels it was his fault, due to his lack of ability, Bill.

Alex Woolfson

I'm glad to hear it, Kiva! She is a lot of fun to write. :)

Alex Woolfson

Good point about the collateral damage, AlpineBox. :) As for the translation, it's based off of Cory's understanding. And "whence" is not a word he'd be familiar with, so unless the creature he is listening to is deliberately trying to be formal, the bite translates words into the type of English that would sound natural to him.

Alex Woolfson

Ha! I don't think Cory is going to let the parallels go easily, camelotcrusade. :)

Alex Woolfson

There were definitely more word balloons than usual. And the 2nd to last panel was tricky to construct so you'd know which balloons to read in which order.

william clapie

Can't make a cake without breaking some eggs. Also, the damage was collateral from the fight, no?

Kiva Catalina

Still really enjoying Honest Almo!

AlpineBob

Something Cory should keep in mind is collateral damage is mostly an issue in inhabited areas; while he's on this path, damaging the surroundings will generally be a negligible problem. Barring setting off avalanches on oneself. Also, I believe it should be "whence you came" in panel 3,. though given the wolf is probably not a native speaker, I probably shouldn't mention it. *EDIT* No, wait, I forgot that even though I reading English, they aren't speaking it. Maybe the translation provided by the bite is less than perfect...

camelotcrusade

Not just you, I had to slow down to digest it all, too -- it was a wordy page.

camelotcrusade

I hope the Oz reference comes up again, Alex! Maybe some red shoes, lol? 👠

Jennifer Barse

Not sure if it's me tonight but I'm have a hard time following the conversation flow. I'm like wait wrong box, wrong spot, how is this suppose to go. Since it was an OZ type page I felt it was kind of funny on my part. I'm blaming my alerts that woke me up to my muddled brain.


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