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Script for Double Cross Chapter Four, Page 165
🕑 Added 2023-11-04 03:08:53 +0000 UTCThanks to hitting our ninth Milestone Goal, Patrons get to see my original script page now in addition to the regular updates.
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william clapie
Still love the reading though. You would have a great series of novels here.
william clapie
"wince" with pleasure? How about closing with breathless anticipation? I get the writers (your) idea but, wince? Usually do that with pain or expecting a blow.
Alex Woolfson
You're very welcome, Mistral! I'm really glad you like getting the chance to read what I wrote. :)
Mistral
This is really sweet to read, and it's interesting seeing the differences between this and the final comic. Thank you for sharing it!
