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Work in Progress - Cover Page
🕑 Added 2023-11-01 18:22:59 +0000 UTCWorking on the cover page for the Death In Downward Dog comic. Needs ro be cleaned up and elements joined together better, but I think it is going in right direction. What do you think? What works, what doesnβt?
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someone else mentioned the expression too. this is very helpful feedback!
Beautiful cover. I like it, but maybe you should have a more natural expression. I'm curious to see the comic anyway! ππ€π
Yes, I think I understand.
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I don't think the outfit is quite right... should perhaps hint at a yoga vibe? The tension in the tape/your body doesn't seem quite right. I think you should be sitting "deeper" in it if that makes sense?! πππΌβπΌ
