Patrefans
DarkBlue from patreon
DarkBlue patreon

V0.14 Plans

🕑 Added 2023-05-13 02:00:02 +0000 UTC

Comments

DarkBlue

Thanks, Blacklabyrinth. Glad you enjoyed it.๐Ÿ‘

Blacklabyrinth

Another great update. You are building a great story. Can't wait to resolve the Cliffhanger, but the wait will be worth it.

Marc Chase

Then you need to add that scene in, ๐Ÿ˜† - or add that watergun fight from the unused picture and have the MC in a white shirt, so the tattoo "bleed through" - ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿคฃ

DarkBlue

Yes it is. ๐Ÿ˜ Thanks, Screenwriter70.

DarkBlue

๐Ÿฅฐ

DarkBlue

Thanks, Terry. ๐Ÿ‘

DarkBlue

Thanks, Jonathan. ๐Ÿ‘

DarkBlue

Thanks, Bob.

DarkBlue

Thanks, Serring.

DarkBlue

I didn't even think about that, Marc. Maybe she's been spying on him in the shower. ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Marc Chase

The freaking update was just released -- it took George Lucas from 1977 - 2005 to complete his masterpiece , Star Wars 1-6 --- as for fixing bugs or a nitpick I found one little nitpick for you --- when Emma has her dream about the MC he has his tattoo on his chest, HOW does she know? She has never seen him shirtless and her mom or Aunt would never say anything about seeing it (Emma would go crazy, in a good way, if her mom said anything about seeing him without a shirt)

Jonathan Hang

Don't people know that an update takes work and time? The cliffhanger must have got to them, lol. I can't wait to see what you bring to future updates.

Terry Latham

As hungry as I am for more of this story...as the saying goes patience is a virtue. Great stuff mate, keep doing what you're doing

Digital Pimp

Nice to finally see a little Emma love!

6pak2go

Sounds like a great plan, DB. I look forward to seeing what changes you make and what happens next. Great cliffhanger!

Bob Fink

With the cliffhanger you left us with, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Serring

Already itching to find out what happens next between MC and Charlotte. Their story is like reading a romance novel :)


More Creators