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Looking for feedback on this Naomi Comic concept!
🕑 Added 2018-03-13 17:04:18 +0000 UTC Hey guys, I have a comic i'm working on in what little spare time I have. It's not supposed to have any dialogue cause i want to be able to spread it around.Any feedback on the comic would be great :D.
The finished product might also be rather rough due to time but will look much cleaner than this...
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Looks Great Naomi looks really cute!
at first was thinking something like "Vic and Blood" from the mind of Harlan Ellison, But hey , keep those creative juices ...umm "squirting"? lol
Momoiro Software
Yeah it's basically just a short sex comic, no real story just trying to make good lewd. Just celebrating the "Year of the Dog".
ok, so no dialog... basically; a conceptional concept of a conceptic comic..? art looks great.(ok, so far ;7 keep at it!) but, storyline has to have at least a "concept", so, not really required... i'm thinking you mean to say this is a story of a "puppy and her master" sorta thing? and, sex?, ..sex is always a good storyline... LoL
