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Tanya's Third Life as a Barbarian Queen, Chapter XXIII

🕑 Added 2025-03-15 17:27:42 +0000 UTC

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FallQM

Yeah Tanya has chastised Enya and the effects of that will be seen over the next chapters. While she does not want it to happen again it was not a bad enough mistake for her to brood about it.

Verified Mustelid

All of the wyverns, Yannit. ALL of them. Good chapter for nation building and prep for the next part of the plot. The supressed cannon is particularly cute. One continuity issue, though. If this is immediately after the previous chapter, has Tanya chewing out Enya for burning the Orc messenger been done offscreen? Should Tanya be in a poor mood internally for the start of this chapter to show this?

Emdee Kay

Cannon bnnuys soon! Cannon Bnnuys soon!

Accbar

Hope in the future you show more of the cultural differences between tha Tanoi and other lepus/saderans, maybe even over time. Story is progressing great. The 9th legion is going to go missing soon. "Tanya Tanoi give me back my 9th legion!"

FallQM

It's another series I work on, a crossover between Legend of Korra and Youjo Senki. I will give the collections a go, I am still relatively new to Patreon.

Christian E. Y.

You should probably organize your stories into colections. Whats that mefitstions thing i see a chapter of?

FallQM

Very true, The Scandinavians were an impressive military power in the early gunpowder years with revolutionary ideas.

Christian E. Y.

If you want quick and cheap cannons, look into leather cannons online. It sounds stupid but if it works, its not stupid at all.

Xodarap4

I forgot that most scholars were just rich idiots while the rank and file were slaves so I can see how much damage Tanya could cause the system

Tony

Hello, my name is Tanya and this is my TED Talk. My personal guess is that she will need to show some spells or tricks to get the attention of her students, and then tell them that her particular brand of magic uses calculations to empower and make the spells easier to cast; and then probably show how those mathematical skills can be used for many other things from construction to ballistics. The hard part is to actually learn the mathematical skills to be able to do the spell-casting among other things. Those who understand would immediately know that Tanya's spell-casting system is completely alien to this world, and one of the first questions they would have is who taught her. Even if she hates it I can easily see the God/s touched/favored rumors being rampant not only among her people.

Old Hammer

This is absolutely fantastic! She is planning things out well but that revelation with the magical suppressor for the cannon is going to give her and her gunner team a major advantage at least a volley as a nasty surprise to an enemy.


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