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Spoiled Brat A Mile Long 2

🕑 Added 2025-10-07 00:32:15 +0000 UTC

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FallQM

as you say they are broken, her ship was not designed to be fully automated and she is kinda bodging things at the moment. getting the exoskeletons will allow her to do a lot of the smaller repairs and get more automatic repair drones repaired/made.

Tony

The story keeps getting better, I like the simple minded drive of the AI to keep going no matter the time spent doing so. I still have questions like what happened to all the maintenance robots a ship like her should have, I mean obviously the broke don't but how come she cant even fix them, yet I guess. I hope she doesn't go too crazy with loneliness since she has no one but herself to talk to. The story reminds me of Hotel, and Hotel: since 2079 by Boichi, both are a story of an AI trying to survive and keep his mission alive during a very long time in an Earth that was destroyed by the climate change. it was really good even managed to bring the lemon ninjas the first time I read it years ago, take a look at it if you have the time, its similar to your idea in some parts, and its a short story. https://mangadex.org/title/4945cc37-4320-45e5-bf4c-e6036101eaa8/boichi-original-sf-short-story-collection

Napoleon III

Absolutely agree with that last statement, to me, kingdom building when well written, is one of the most satisfying genres of (literature ?). In reality it is in concept very similar to the much inferior genre of Litrpg and other lazy system based slop. It’s all about gradual, logical, progression, with threats to all along the way test said progression. Except this is one of right ways to do it. Well in my opinion anyways (I’m literally never wrong)


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