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🕑 Added 2019-08-02 16:52:02 +0000 UTCOkay, this is not an extra comic, I'm working on it, it's the comic that will be posted next week. I use this post as a test because I'm new at this. If you have any advice, I'll be happy to hear it!
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Fabarts
Oh you're right, I'll try to fix it later, thank you very much!
Looks very good, one minor suggestion is on slide 4 when Dani is chewing gum, adding illustrations for both sides of her mouth seems bloated. I would reccomend making the outside curve smaller if you want it to look more cartoony if that makes sense
