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Miss Helena's Ballet Academy for Immature Mothers - Chapter One

🕑 Added 2023-02-24 21:09:25 +0000 UTC

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Thank you so much!

Hi Autumn! Thanks for your feedback. I tried to create characters that I think everyone would like to see regressed or humiliated because they are not that good a people. But I do understand your point of view. Maybe next time, I can poll it to see how well-received it would be!

I'm excited to see where this goes, honestly. It's a concept I never really considered. I love to also see your writing improving considerably with every post.

I like this concept, but the inclusion of obvious political stuff like Trump, LGBT supporters (announcing they are proud supporters), phobic stuff, race, it honestly took me out of it, personally. I like to not read fiction that overly denotes our reality. It prevents my escape. Thought my feedback could be of some insight. Others might enjoy it, it just made it hard to enjoy as I felt I was hearing people on a twitter argue, which ruined the immersion for me.


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