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Netherwitch - 28

🕑 Added 2025-01-20 22:20:32 +0000 UTC

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Milandaanza

Okay I caved couldn’t wait till July for book 4. Damn you and your amazing writing!

Jayem

“Wait, you aren’t lusting after our master, are you?” I’m pretty sure their ‘master’ is lusting after Sylvia, or at least her clone is. XD Emily’s obsession with Sylvia makes a whole lot of sense when viewed through a romantic lens. Thanks for the chapter and arc! Very much looking forward to the next release!

awelonblue

Sylvia would sneer at the very idea of being selfless.

Eriermence

I’m back again apparently because my mind just can’t stop thinking about this story, but I realized what type of girl that would be Esmerelda/Emily’s type, basically a more selfless type of girl who’s willing to protect/help others without asking a price of them or judging them for needing help, willing to make great personal sacrifices for their loved ones, and who’s willing to fight to do so. And said girl would preferably be well learned as well. Aka, basically a magical girl just like the ones Emily saw in her time on Earth. Someone who would be in incredibly short supply in Hell for so, so, so many reasons. With the way I came up with this being kinda purely from just how obsessed Emily seems to be with magical girls in general from their outfits to just the idea itself that she dragged her father from her short time on Earth to watch an entire season of one of the shows , alongside just how she/Esmerelda want to do right by their own witches and make their lives better. And someone who Sylvia, despite her claims to the contrary about not being a hero, fits scarily well into. Throughout the story, in both minor and major ways, she’s been selfless. From during the exams she purposefully made sure the runes she identified were at the very end of the book so she that everyone else in her class weren’t inadvertently screwed over by her, a small thing, yet selfless and kind all the same. From the very beginning she’s been a protector when the demon hounds first rushed in, she might’ve gotten a little lucky with the first one, but with the second one she went out of her way to lead Riley and Emily who she still barely knew to try and save the obviously struggling other trio of girls which included Valerie, another named girl who I can’t remember right now, and a nameless girl who perished from her wounds, doing something that would get her nicknamed mad dog by one of the bullies because of how crazy it was to do to help protect them while not being too judgemental if at all of the fact they, among quite a few girls back then, had been cowards. And again, she couldn’t stop herself from saving Valerie and the other witch from slavery even when it was at a potentially huge risk to herself being caught up in it. Not to mention how she saved Riley from being enslaved as well first before trying to get out of the situation herself by killing her, which makes perfect sense in this world and no sense out of context lol. She worked to ensure the group she was with in her tournament was safe after the initial ambush and helped them hold off against the undead, being pivotal in their defense instead of leaving. Hell, even for Emily she was personally willing to sacrifice her system and continually advocating for her to not make the deal with Lucifer until the very end, trying to protect her. And just now with Belkis, instead of taking the easy way to try to help her by just listening to Esmerelda’s orders or even killing her first to be safe, she went above and beyond to outmaneuver the vile demon attempting to break her and took a great personal risk to herself to do so just to save her. Even if she did have quite a few backup plans for Belkis if she weren’t able to talk her down to let her save her, Sylvia was still taking a huge risk. And to top it all to boot, despite how she keeps saying she’s only so fervent in her learning because of the system, it doesn’t change the fact she is very well learned for a demon that’s only a year old. And all this is to say that Sylvia is in many ways the exact type of Esmerelda/Emily and fits near perfectly into Belkis’s claims that she was. And with Emily, essentially, being her dream magical girl. Also wow, I just realized just how much I wrote upon this insight hitting me lol.

Eriermence

I’ve just had a sudden realization while thinking about this chapter again. Belkis is 100% going to accidentally rat out Sylvia changing her hairstyle to Emily once she arrives at the Academy, isn’t she? Sylvia is so screwed.

MrAcerulez

The plot thickens! Very nice

Eriermence

First of all, holy, Belkis must’ve really been going through it. And I now feel really bad about ever thinking in chapter 25 that she using psychic magic on herself to ever like that vile demon. And also strangely proud of myself for identifying she was using psychic magic on herself, even if dead wrong on what she was doing with it. And Sylvia finding a way to free Belkis without killing her is really cool and speaks to her being more then just her system, even if she did have a little help. Sylvia almost inadvertently picking up the same Duat Dream Drop after Belkis was just freed from it is also it’s own type of horror. Thank goodness for Belkis’s saving the day too. And it’ll be good for her to have her reunion with Esmerelda, it feels like something that would really help her after what she just escaped from. And Esmerelda herself being a lover of girls is perhaps the least shocking thing in the story. It certainly does put a lot of Emily’s reactions to Sylvia in a new light though since Sylvia is apparently her type. Cute and adorable are definitely it appearance wise, though that’s also a result of her relentless work to make her not only cute but enjoy being cute. And how much of that is Sylvia’s personality is also a great question. Finally, I guess we now have the answer on why Viscount Potami was so helpful, who knew he was also a follower of Lucifer. That’ll be interesting to see play out. And now, I’m finished with the Patreon chapters as well and must suffer, why have you done this to me! But actually though, thank you again for writing this great story! I’ll be looking forward to reading more in April! Oh, and also Sylvia finally beginning to experiment with herself now that she has some privacy is hilarious. She’s surprisingly precious despite everything and is as adorable as Emily says she is.

Brantal

... that interlude... shivers... well done.

Simon Hoerder

Hehehe. I just had a vision of the end: Zeus, Lucifer and bunch of other big egos all transformed into cute little witches and decanted into an academy where they’ll be taught proper decorum. Probably won’t happen if I understand correctly that they’d keep their powers after returning from the origin and the special requirements that Esmeralda has for recruiting new witches but hey, it would be fun! 😂

Steve Barbour

My guesstimate is 14 arcs, of which 7 are written.

Nsixtyfour

So good, love the way the story has been progressing. Wasn't expecting Potami to be a supporter. How many arcs are you expecting this to have? It seems like this could go for quite a while, which I'm all for.

Katherine

Uh, oh…


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