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Smart Start [TG, Bimbo] Full Story
🕑 Added 2020-08-29 18:32:04 +0000 UTC"Carl goes on a quiz game show called "Smart Start".
With every wrong answer, the studio audience votes on a change he's going to have. "
This is idea provided by Musclecar24 the August winner of "You Write a Story"!
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Happy birthday, John Doe! :)
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Comments
Steven Barry
Thank you for the feedback, Alexa. It says Bond film in the 1990s, not exactly in 1990, so Brosnan would be the right answer. Looks like James Watt was the one who upgraded the idea, but not invented, so I changed it to Thomas Savery. Sometimes I get caught up in the process and fail to notice some grammar, punctuation, or other mistakes. Thank you for pointing them out for me. I did my best to correct them. Let me know ;)
MollyRealized
To be honest, this had a lot of punctuation, grammar, and even factual errors. It was very unpolished when compared to your other works. 'Thpught', Hero of Alexandria created the first steam engine, there was no Bond film in 1990 and the franchise was between actors (Dalton '89 vs. Brosnan '95); there's multiple screens where there's the generic graphic in the circle template; for someone to be 6'10" originally would make them unusually giant-sized. "He was fast to break the silence", etc.
Thea
Amazing as always!!! :D
Unit369M
Good but not the best. The best is "Truth or Dare"
John Doe
Thanks for the happy birthday and great story as always
Steven Barry
You mean "Carly" to "Kali"?
IVERSOX
Nice story but some names change in the end ... It's kind of wired
