StevenC
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Back to School [TG, Bimbo] Full story
🕑 Added 2020-05-29 13:00:18 +0000 UTC"Back to School" <= Click here
"A teenage sister uses magic to get back at her older Ivy-league educated brother by turning him into a high school bimbo."
The first "You Write the Story"! The biggest story I've made so far.
40 pages... what?
Yes, it's 40 pages long! I hope you guys like it. Can't wait for your comments ;)
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Comments
Navid Jamali
the drive works better in terms of readability, gifs don't load but honestly I'll take this over the pages not changing at all.
Steven Barry
Here, I've made a Google version. Please, tell me if works. https://drive.google.com/file/d/18grrOLC_SQJgPMZs1u4YTJCqQBZ4STdt/view?usp=sharing
Steven Barry
Does google drive work better for you?
Navid Jamali
Steven Barry
I'm really glad that you liked it!
Dpat
I agree, the slow burn was great!
Steven Barry
Thank you!
Juanan15
awesome
Steven Barry
Thank you! I'm glad you liked more gradual mind change.
TG_Sorcerer
Loved the slow burning corruption! This was a great story!
