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The Final Serve [TG, Bimbo]
🕑 Added 2021-10-29 11:44:41 +0000 UTC"Dave can't miss the opportunity to get into Yale as a top varsity tennis player, but the competition is too tough for him.
Fortunately, the same offer is legit for the girl's team, so he decides to “identify” as female to increase his chances."
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This was the choice of Total Immersion, congratulations, Nephyte!
I must say, the phrase "Starts failing classes cause he is getting dumber. Happens over the course of a week of tennis practice." made it so much more challenging, despite my fondness for slow burns, especially over a week.
Anyway, I'll tend to get back to the shorter stories. The constant run behind the schedule is getting frustrating for me, and I want to get it back on track, but my recent habit of cramming too many details in the story makes it unmanageable.
Well, I hope you guys like it :)
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Comments
J
This was great, I love the more detailed stories! Is the halloween story coming on this spooky night?
Steven Barry
Thank you so much, Eric!
Steven Barry
Of course! Just send me a private message when it's up.
Steven Barry
Thank you! Yeah, my sometimes phrasing can be a bit unusual.
Steven Barry
Yay! Glad you enjoyed it.
Steven Barry
Thank you for the inspiring words, Parker. I hope your book will turn out great!
Eric Herrera
Great video as always
TgCaps97
If it comes to next story, will us, that can't afford subscription for next month get it on priv? I see that it was scheduled for today, but i'm not sure if we will get it this month.
JacobJessicaTG
Great job. Couple issues with phrases but maybe it’s a regional thing. Great job! Great read.
a
Love this one!
Parker Jackson
I love when there's more detail in the story. Though I know the feeling of adding too much detail as it's killing me when I try to write my own book. Keep up the good stories, I love every one of them!
