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Claimings 5, chapter 6

🕑 Added 2025-12-02 02:36:41 +0000 UTC

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Lyn Gala

I'm glad the kids are coming across as non-obnoxious. And humanity is not united in anything, and their views toward the Rownt are included in that.

Lyn Gala

Hey, with the end of the semester grading, my brain has been so devoured by school that I haven't even noticed. So, no apologies. None. I'm so glad that you're enjoying the interactions with the children. I know kids can get obnoxious, but I like them. And as always, bless you for the catches.

Mandy Lancaster

I can't believe I set this aside days ago and only found it again today. My apologies for the late response! Ondry with the kids is absolutely adorable! Liam having to translate behavior to both sides is always wonderful. I hope you've hit the end of the semester and can breathe a little better. Catches: teeth showing before conscious mind could register – before his conscious he was hunting hungry eggling and trying to lure them close. – hungry egglings His tail would survived, as would his – would survive,

Simone (snowsim)

Ah, this was wonderful! I love the interactions with the kids. Also enjoyable and interesting are the different ways different economic classes think of the Rownt, Ondry wanting to discomfort the manager in his own place of work using the grandmothers, and his thoughts like "His tail would survived, as would his reputation—assuming Liam told no one." Oh! I just noticed when I c&p'd that there's a "d" on "survive".


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