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Luke's Big Butt Problems Chapter 8 (Revised)

🕑 Added 2023-03-23 00:30:18 +0000 UTC

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Charlie Walker

That's a totally valid interpretation! For me the endgame has always been Sammy, so I have him take on that role more.

I just got caught up in what I was hoping for. I always imagine coach's cock and big muscled body would be the penultimate experience cementing lukes newly accepted role as pussy boy for cock thank you though for writing these stories and keep making amazing work

Charlie Walker

This chapter was written from Coach’s POV! :) I felt like the previous chapter featured Luke already accepting his pussy, so there wasn’t much a character arc for this one. Instead I wanted to show things from outside Luke’s POV, and I also wanted to write from the top’s POV! :D It’s harder to describe Luke’s ass when its getting fucked with his POV because Luke can’t see his own ass lol. Next chapter will be from Sammy’s POV! ;)

I'm sure some people will find that seeing things through the coaches perspective is even hotter however I've always enjoyed seeing the story through Luke's perspective. The change of perspective really threw me off and I was disappointed not experiencing what happened through Luke's perspective to be honest. Please don't get down to yourself because of my comment you're a great writer it's just my personal preference. I'm not even sure if I'm wording this correctly but it seemed like we were primarily getting everything through coach on this one. I don't remember hearing much of Luke's inner thoughts. Maybe I'm wrong

Bella Lime

Bring on the next chapter with Sammy…

grkotter91

I'm glad you were able to take your time revising this! I think you did a great job of making the chapter hotter in a way that actually made Coach's personal conflicts more apparent. It made sense that he would want to separate himself from Luke because he felt weird about the situation, but seeing how the pheromones from Luke's pussy were messing with his head while he worked through that made everything better in my opinion.


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