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Chapter 119 - Alchemy Competition 7

🕑 Added 2024-09-13 07:00:09 +0000 UTC

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Potato Hero

Thank you for the suggestions.

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I'd like to offer a correction. The word "limped" means that someone walked with a limp, not something going limp. So I would suggest changing the following: "until they limped. -> "until they went limp" "they limped forever from the trauma." -> "they go limp forever from the trauma." "If this kid limped forever" -> If this kid went limp forever"


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