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Chapter 120

🕑 Added 2023-08-05 00:53:15 +0000 UTC

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ThatGit

Thank you, I'll definitely take that into consideration! Glad to see you managed to get things figured out!

DNAjester

I agree a huge draw is the magic system and Orion's magical progression. I look forward to what's coming next.

ThatGit

I'm glad to hear you think so! I'm always worried when I post chapters like this because, while I personally enjoy them, I know a common complaint with my writing is that its been 300k words and Orion is just finishing the first half of one year. The next chunk of the story is going to be moving a lot faster (or at least it's supposed to) but I am definitely not going to be moving away from the core style of the story.

SuperbStarling

I realize these theory-heavy chapters must take a lot of effort to write while not providing a lot of plot development, but for what it's worth I think they're a major draw for the story that separates them from other works. This and the other exam chapters have been really enjoyable, and flesh out the magic system/character besides.


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