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164 - Sunday at the Land of Dreams

🕑 Added 2025-05-13 07:53:40 +0000 UTC

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Kuzo

Maaan finally done with marathoning this series. It's not the best romcom, but something that you can enjoy as side dishes. And thanks for the chappu~

Perf3ct1y

I agree with generic outlines of the characters(especially the females minus Shizuku) but being afraid or feeling threatened by her after a 10+ year friendship just would feel off and if not more generic, I hope they build up the main pair more but I feel the author is trying to target the whole cast now but has been hindered by his illness where he can’t keep the consistency in his writing

Paul O'Donnell

Thank for the translation, SLT. Peak Shizuku teasing. She ran circles around poor Ayaka, it was far too easy. Shizuku is my top girl. If only she wasn't so short. Saki still hasn't had enough character development to even get her to the starting line. She has served as a foil for Ayaka and nothing more. The fact that she just nods to the idea of Shizuku and Ayaka being a perfect match shows how two dimensional she is. She should show more resistance to the threat to her and Ayaka's friendship. Her panic over being Tomoya's girlfriend is far too generic. Ayaka is just too bland for me. She has been sold on her physical beauty and the art from the light novel is far too generic, plus, even if she was stunning, that is still not enough. So, while she is a good person, she still doesn't have much of a personality to speak of.


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