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AO 6 Ch 26

🕑 Added 2025-03-29 09:58:28 +0000 UTC

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Justin

Maybe something to give more nuance to in the book version is to have Ard be less callous and non-chalant when he commented on how Colin was "well-fed" since that was how Zuri lost her parents and she was pretty shaken up by that. Alternatively, you can have one of the girls point it out and have Ard regret his callous remarks. It's a little detail but makes the characters more human

Daniel Glasson

Great chapter and excellent choice.


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