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RD 4 Ch 6

🕑 Added 2025-04-12 06:00:10 +0000 UTC

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Jacob

In fairness, Bran as a character might not know all the vehicle differences and just thinks of them as jeeps

Caniner

This is a pet peeve, and doesn’t matter at all for the story. But almost no militaries use jeeps for transport anymore. They use APCs (Armored personnel carriers) such as MRAPs (Mine Resistant Ambush Protected Vehicles) for transportation into or around active combat. Trust me, they’re different. I cringe a little every time I read “jeep” in reference to any military troop transport in one of your books. Again, a complete nitpick and not at all relevant to the overall story, but please change it 🙏 Additionally, a general is probably way too high of a rank to be that close to an active combat situation with as many unknown variables as there would be for the Danish military. Most likely it would be a Captain, maybe a major. The brass would be communicating with them over the radio. No chance in hell a general would show up in person

Ori Shifrin

Hey, where's the crunch? IIRC,we haven't been told Bran's gains from the Vault in book 3 and his current level and skill gains as of now....

NiceTryMate

«As we spoke, there was a distant crack before my head tipped back and(as) something slammed into my forehead.» Bullets travel faster than the speed of sound, so it should be; get hit by bullet, then hear the gunshot.

Mister42

I say this as a jeep owner, I'm not sure the Danish military uses jeeps anymore, but nice chapter!


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