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RD 4 Ch 38

🕑 Added 2025-05-15 06:00:06 +0000 UTC

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NovaZero

The pacing is just nauseating because my brain doesn't want some things to rush by but then it does and we're stuck on shitless we might not care for and then gloss over other bits completely.

Thomas Kazmierczak

While I did enjoy this chapter, I must admit that it's difficult to follow the story with so many time skips, location jumps and random bits of lore dropping seemingly haphazardly. It's like you're trying to cram too much into a single book.

Chris Cooper

Yea this whole book is falling apart. Things are being stated and not explained. Time skips are to long and to many, stats are always messed up. If you wanted to write a book that could ruin the series, this one could be it.


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