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AO 7 Ch 9

🕑 Added 2025-07-30 06:00:06 +0000 UTC

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LaShaon Jordan

Ard is a great under dog MC, and the author has stayed true to his character. He’s always wanted to be a mage and has enjoyed learning about magic. He has taken hits for his family and played all the characters for them. He never got any noble lessons from his mother or grandfather. He’s learned all of the noble things from the woman around him. It’s sad when the family he wanted in his life the most just don’t want to understand him, just use him.

Jeremy Daniels

Amazing chapter!!! Minor things to fix but the overall storyline was great!

dark phoenix99

I agree with you. I think this chapter was a much improved Ard. Toned down while remaining sarcastic. It's funny how scared of him they all are. He's basically the incredible hulk of magic. It's clever connecting the goddesses to the reason why he can't stay. He's got a mission and it makes him look slightly less threatening if they think he's just got God Juice on his side. It its pretty funny that his mom is all like, I want you to love this place and not every mage is bad, only to take him into an incredibly hostile meeting with mages who are acting like jackasses to him.

Raven3ye

Minus the naming and gender mistakes, it was a really interesting chapter. The intimidation scene was gloriously done! I think Ards exasperation with the machinations of his mother and the elders is coming off a little too much like a childish act rather than the disappointment it should be. Other than that, I'm loving the direction this is taking

Raj

Everyone is hating on this chapter, I loved it. This is the old ard I enjoyed.


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