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RD 5 Ch 17

🕑 Added 2025-09-20 06:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Dave

Tftc

[OMEN]

I'd honestly consider going back to the drawingboard on the trials, this is just not it. I'm not sure what I was expecting but it has all been kind of hard to read.

yo dude

The anger of Simone feels a little artificial, like she's some NPC. Didn't she have like ultra intuition from her bloodline and she should be able to figure out bran is actually the real bran entirely on her own? I think the I could see the next scene being an entire relationship blow up that goes nuclear because her only identifying feature of bran is that he's strong. I won't really want it to go that way because that makes the relationship feel really superficial


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