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Chapter 17

🕑 Added 2022-01-19 03:00:02 +0000 UTC

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wolf Master

Wonderful chapter. On one of the later floors, would a ocean floor, filled with islands and treasure and sea monsters. Based of of sea of thieves and pirates of the Caribbean. Land mass with 7-8 % land mass 93-92 percent water, corals caves sea trenches sunken ships, wrecks etc.

Stranger Danger

I do most of my writing on RoyalRoad. The way it spaces between lines there is based on the website interpreting new paragraphs. Since Patreon seemed to take to the spacing fairly well, I've just copied it straight from my draft there. Alternatively I can try a different spacing method next upload and you can tell me if that's any bettee

kexD

There is spacing on my device (reading using Android app)

Arcanical

Maybe it’s just me, but there is no spacing in the entire chapter, just one big block of text

Stranger Danger

It's a secret~ really though, I want the first view you guys get of the floor to be through the delver's eyes. It's easy to describe what you're making as you make it, but viewing the finished product makes you wonder how it was made

Pierre laplant

What's his fith floor? 1-crabs 2-fish 3-forest 4-rats 5-? 6-lava

12Baku34 .

It happens to everyone. It's also the only one I notice was miss spelled in the chapter, so at least you don't have a lot to change in this one. Unless someone else finds some more.

Stranger Danger

Lol, how did I miss that

12Baku34 .

I think the word your looking for is a master-forged sword. Not sward.


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