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Chapter 34

🕑 Added 2022-03-30 04:25:13 +0000 UTC

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Ladyhotcomb

Give my mushu a rematch!

Brandon Lambert

Updates?

Vector

Or even just traps that while technically being passable are anything but. 200 meter tall shaft that fills with lava every 5 seconds anyone?

abowden

I wonder about that, I don't know why his core has to be human accessible to allow mana flow, why not just have thousands of hamster sized tunnels leading to it, and nothing else?

Vector

Does the dungeon have some sort of wired instinct or other problem that stops him from making his core simply inaccessible to humans? Like making the only access via a tunnel too small etc. Or even by a trap that is effectively impossible to pass, like filling a 100m corridor with lava or something?

Pierre laplant

Woo

Brandon Lambert

No way the platniums are after his core dimwit

Kane Carmichael

or i guess it could create floors of parallel depths and change the path down the dungeon to be a floor noone will yet have information on. maybe even open up a new entrance and close up the old one once the mana has a new path to flow in.

Kane Carmichael

something the dungeon could do when there is no longer worry of surface retaliation escalating in strength (because its already at max) would be to send dungeon agents out to burn books on the dungeon.

wolf Master

how deep is the dingo at this point? maybe a floor in the lava chamber would be cool, if you make special glass and clairvoyance charms, maybe harvest the heat for mana or electrical devices, and extracted resources for the magma to gather immense resources to make stuff. (magma has some of the richest resource substance on a planet.

wolf Master

teleport formation? special entrance with protection against tampering. also space expansion charms assimilated into the walls of the dungeon past certain floors to increase the size of the floor as well?

Vector

I think the dungeon needs to start thinking of a way to let these OP plats skip some of the earlier floors, cause they aren’t even being slowed down and it must cost a fair chunk of mana each time.

X Blade

I can't wait to see what monsters are waiting for them.

abowden

Damn. Dungeon better find a way to make Mushu more skilled AND more powerful. He can learn even after death and guilders cannot, this allows him to train in ways that are impossible for them. he should at least be able to become a challenge. I wonder how he'll trip then up in the next level... I hope he takes out at least one, most of them will get away even in an extremely uneven fight, but just one dying would be nice.

Stranger Danger

I'm sorry, but I've been writing the chapters like this the whole time. If you're only now realizing there are cliffhangers, I don't know what to tell you. In this case, the chapter wrote itself this way. When I reached this point I thought, yes. This is about the right word count for the chapter, and a good point to stop.

Saaski

😫 I’m already reading your story. Cliffhangers will not keep me reading. Cliffhangers are just annoying. I was getting all excited reading your amazing words. Now I’m just annoyed. Cliffhangers have never made me want to read/watch more of anything. It is Just annoying.


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