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Chapter 48

🕑 Added 2022-07-20 04:30:01 +0000 UTC

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Cole Graham

More likely, if I were the king, I would take the island for myself, post an outpost and then begin a true attempt to chain the dungeon. With no understanding of how intelligent the cavern system is, the temptation to use it as a source of war beasts and materials would be too tempting. Oooor... Follow the dukes plan. Waste countless resources on an island that has been useless up until the dungeons discovery, and find myself weak to retaliation, as I try to hold an island too far away logistically AND breach it's depths.

RedFaux

Gonna be honest, the Duke is grating on me big time story wise. If what he attempts is even remotely successful, that will annihilate any of my belief that the kingdom would have even made his far. 5 Platinums in what, a few months? If the King throws that away he's a fucking idiot

Stranger Danger

I'm glad I managed to make a believable villain. Yes, his short-sightedness and focus on vengeance was what I was trying to get across here

Undead Writer

Thanks for the chapter!

Philipp Gawol

The king won't fall for this shit. The church might willingly throw their lot in with this retard and maybe force the king's hand. The most likely outcome is that the dungeon is just brought to the attention of the entire court and the political game of 'grab the dungeon', starts in earnest. It's likely that the king already knows that the dungeon is sapient, since that would be the optimal way to dismiss the bounty, at the same time he has the authority to prevent any future attempts, while potentially just being a single person with the secret knowledge of the dungeon being sapient. Maybe the spymaster would know too.

X Blade

Good idea

X Blade

My thoughts exactly

X Blade

Indeed, but then again its fiction.

X Blade

Shits about to go down

The undecided username

The king and his advisors would be stupid to fall to trick, from a man who's known to be in grief and has a vendetta against the dungeon.

Pierre laplant

Woo

Azurus Icewind

This Duke I feel is a bit too dense to be realistic considering the world they live in. The other commenters here bring up good points about this situation to which I have to agree with. I understand we need a behind the scenes plot to exist so the story has a reason to go beyond because "The dungeon got stronger and stronger, the end" is not going to be satisfying. That said, I'm entirely looking forward to see how the Duke fails to achieve his goals and what other fun stuff is going to happen because of it. Or perhaps the duke doesn't matter, but people discovering and being (ir)rationally afraid of a new dungeon created sapient race and the potential of harm it brings to humanity if they ever escaped, despite all assurances otherwise, could be a new sub plot to replace the dukes plot. In any case, humanity needs to send something better than Peak Platinum to be a threat to our Dungeon Core at this point and so we can see the later floors in action. I anticipate the power creep to ramp up soon. Looking forward to another chapter, and hopefully you don't get delayed too much more in the future beyond the planned break. I do enjoy this story a lot.

Viktor Alexia

The Dungeon (probably): Great! Now I can finally show off the lower floors *rubbing imaginary hands* XD Me: Great! Now we can see more arrogant guilders get slaughtered in the lower floors! *evil cackle* Things are about to get interesting. On that note, I kinda would like to see how other parties like the Bahrain Empire would react to this. Some Bahrainese POV pleaseee!

Niraada

So, with the understanding that what happened with his other son being poisoned is perhaps outside the scope of the story, I like to imagine him being like "Poisoning is a perfectly acceptable way for a noble to die-- It's practically natural causes! A Dungeon though? That's one insult too many. Let my surviving daughter inherit? Name a nephew or cousin an heir? No, it's far too late for that. I will burn this duchy down around me to have my vengeance!"

Marble

Oh ffs this guy sucks. He has actually lost his mind and will destroy his entire Duchi if he succeeds in destroying the core and you know, ending this series. Hopefully the king is not incredibly incompetent as that would surely spell disaster for the kingdom. Especially if he is somehow stupid enough to get duped by a man with such a painfully obvious vendetta. Congratulations I really dislike this villain! Vengeance blinded short sighted vindictive fools really rile me up.

Felix Tomiak

Tftc


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