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Chapter 129
🕑 Added 2025-01-30 03:01:30 +0000 UTCAN: Unedited. And the Poll results are in! Instincts new name, from next chapter will be Cadmus!
Also, THREE WEEKS IN A ROW LETS GOOOOOO.
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The First Floor, The Dungeon, Atlantis
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The music had started as they approached the end of the tunnel, the teal light given off by those huge manalights reflected onto the ceiling of the tunnel's exit. And it wasn't just any music; but the tinny notes of a music box. Classic Horror Movie stuff, really. But as the notes turned into a melody, he found it achingly familiar. Where had he heard it before?
As they filtered into the final chamber, the music changed. The 'beat dropped.' the loud, dramatic notes of an organ rose, and Akio felt chills run down his spine. He remembered.
Tamesou Akio was, to be completely honest, bamboozled. Flabbergasted. Utterly confused.
That was Davy Jones, the main theme for the main villain of two Pirates of the Caribbean movies! This realization was followed by the sand shifting ahead of them, in the middle of the cavern. A huge Crab, the size of two Clydesdale horses standing side-by-side, screeched a war-cry and raised it's flaming sword-pincer high.
Akio turned to gauge the reactions of his teammates.
Bruce and Sophie looked just as poleaxed as he's sure he did. Haythem and Bertram looked shocked, but as he watched they shook their heads and wrote the music off as another weird thing the dungeon was doing. They didn't know that Disney was about to discover how to break through dimensions and sue the dungeon for copyright violations.
"This is different," Haythem cautioned. "The music, and how the Guardian is moving. Follow the plan, but be careful; we don't know if it'll have the same openings."
"Got it!" Akio answered, moving forward and raising Amaterasu. He channelled mana into his shield, and Ama twisted it into a shield spell. They'd gotten much better at this with practice, and the shield of transparent blue hard-light extended three feet in all directions. When it touched the ground the shield deformed slightly, the edge drawing in rather than cutting and dividing the sand, potentially wasting mana in the process.
He raised his sword, hearing Bertram and Haythem behind him, to his left and right respectfully. He glimpsed Bruce and Sophie as they took the extreme flanks. The plan was simple; focus the Boss's attention on the tanks and be enough of a nuisance that it can't afford to turn away. Bruce and Sophie would use their magic to do DPS and wear it down.
"We could probably kill it easily on our own," Haythem had explained as they marched single-file through the cramped tunnel. "But that wouldn't help you three any. The only way to improve is to fight the monsters yourselves. If we did it all for you, how would you grow? You three will do most of the fighting here; Bertram and I will only step in to help if we think you really need it."
Akio understood what they meant; Exp wasn't shared through the party, but by direct contribution to slain monsters. Powerleveling wasn't possible. He shook his head, and refocused on the Boss as it stepped forward. This wasn't a game, this was real life.
Akio raised his shield as the Crab Boss swung it's sword-claw. Fire leapt from the claws edge, a coherent slice of flaming energy quickly covered the distance between them and struck his raised shield. It glowed brighter when the fire hit, but quickly dimmed back to normal afterward. As the music rose to a crescendo, Akio, Bruce and Sophie made their counter attack.
Bruce lashed out with four large water tentacles writhing behind him, the sharp ice-blades on their tips slicing into the armour around the crab's legs. Sophie did similarly, tendrils sharp darkness cutting into the less-armoured shell on the inside of it's legs. Bruce, only able to use ice as a transformation of water and not mana-infused as he would with a proper Ice affinity, was unable to draw blood. Sophie's strike had little rivulets of coppery blue blood running and staining the sand.
Akio struck immediately after, as it was reeling from his friend's attacks; he stepped forward, hard-light retreating into the edges of his shield, and cast his own version of the Boss's first attack. A coherent slice of yellow light lashed out towards it's eyestalks. The Boss raised it's shield-claw, and mimicking Akio and Ama's shield, produced a film of fire over it's claw. The slice dissipated as it struck, and Akio had to dodge-roll to avoid it's counterstrike. It spat a dozen fireballs from it's mouth in an arc, the teal flames were so hot they turned the sand to black glass where they struck.
As Akio stood from his roll he raised his shield again, the dormant spell re-activating and spreading across his shield with a thought. Man, had that been hard to figure out. Just in time, too, as the Boss's claw physically struck his shield. The spell absorbed most of the impact, and with a solid stance Akio shield-arm barely budged. He swung back at it, and his sword cut a chunk of chitin from it's sword claw around a joint.
It pulled back, then tilted as Bruce finally managed to cut through a joint. Given it had eight legs, losing one wasn't immobilizing, but it seemed to hurt nonetheless. Sophie's thousand-cuts method seemed to be having results, too. Blue blood ran from it's legs in a constant stream; the pitch-black shadow the crab cast in the teal light a perfect conduit for her magic.
It stepped more carefully, and seemed to decide they needed to be dealt with.
Akio wouldn't let it.
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The Creator, Atlantis, The Kalenic Sea
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What are they feeding these kids?!
I mean, I knew they had to be Golds to even be allowed to enter the dungeon, but their coordination was unreal! The two mages were doing significant damage, but I couldn't turn away from the tank for fear of him using the sword-slice magic to cut right through my shell, just like he'd done for the smaller crabs.
But the other two were doing way to much damage to leave them alone... Well, time to cheat.
Three more Crabs rose from the pool in the cavern, which coincidentally lay behind Bruce. A Brute, Squire and a Flamer stepped from the bubbling waters and immediately moved into action. The music's original ending had long past, and was now playing an extended version I'd made up that fit the style and theme of the original.
"Adds! Sophie, I need help!" "Got it! Akio, keep it's attention!" "Right!" The three teen heroes coordinated.
I micromanaged the hell out of the fight. The flamer focused on Sophie, it's fire dispersing the shadows and making her Darkness magic weaker. The Brute and Squire teamed up to fight Bruce. Haythem and Bertram circled around to be in range to help, but still restrained themselves. They hadn't contributed to the fight yet, but seemed like they would step in if the kids were actually in danger.
I pressured Akio, throwing fireballs and sword-strikes constantly. He was surprising adept on defense; making the right call to shield, parry and dodge-roll when he was out-of-position. But as the fight dragged on, Sophie was able to get a solid strike on the Flamer, and moved to aid Bruce. Together they overcame the rest of the Crabs I'd sent and turned their attention back to me.
As they did I moved.
I turned quickly, lashing out with my legs with force to knock Akio away. I swiped my sword-claw, an arc of flame speeding at Bruce and Sophie. Bruce brought up a shield of water that blocked it, but I was right there. My shield crashed into his, and broke right through, hitting him directly. My shield-bash threw him away, and he crashed into the water behind him. In a swift movement, I brought the other claw down towards Sophie, who'd frozen in place when Bruce was hit.
Haythem was suddenly there, intercepting the sword.
"Don't freeze, girl, or you're dead." He said, using his absurd strength to throw my claw away. I stepped backward, and felt a sharp pain on my underside. Akio was under there, and had stabbed directly into my belly. There was a feeling of building mana, and Sebastian the Eternal died. His Respawn crystal activated, pulling the majority of his mana and his soul off to reconstitute him in half an hour or so. His body, however, exploded in a bright flash that broke through the carapace on his back.
Then the rest fell over Akio.
There was a moment of silence, then the boy stood up, his head poking through the gaping hole in the crab. He was absolutely covered in blue blood and guts.
"I'm okay!" he called, "But, uh, can someone help me out of here?"
I mentally chuckled as Haythem stood on the Crab's back and lifted the boy from the flesh hole with ease. Sophie took a step towards them, but visibly stepped back and took a deep, shuddering breath.
"Good job, kid. You three still got enough mana?" Haytyhem asked. The teens nodded.
"Yeah. That last spell took a bit out of me, but I'm still half-full," Akio elaborated. Yeah, from what I could tell he didn't have quite as much mana as the other two, but still had some in reserve.
"Great. We'll go through the Second for a bit, introduce you to the monsters and traps there, and then go back to the surface," Haythem said, stepping back down off the Crab Knight's corpse. "You three all have potential, but still have a few things to work on. Here, take a potion each. I know you didn't take many hits, but the sooner they're healed, the less chance they'll scar."
There was a few minutes of harvesting, Akio having somehow not blown up Sebastian's monster core, and they moved to the exit door.
The teens gasped in awe at the glowing roof, lit by runes in circular patterns around the central stalactite. The mana condensed into the drops of water that ran down the rock and dropped into the bowl below. "What's that?" Sophie asked, walking up to the basin.
"Mana water. It's the base for most potions, and normally hard to make." Bertram explained, "Most alchemists need a dedicated mage to energize water for them, which drives up the price. This is why potions are so cheap on Atlantis, without the corresponding lack of quality. Hard to make bad potions with such a high-quality starting point."
"Could I use it?" Bruce asked. "Does it enhance my water magic somehow?"
"I actually don't know," Haythem answered, after a shared glance with Bertram. "Never worked with a water mage, and never thought to ask. Most collect and sell it for profit, rather than use it to fight."
"Can I try?" the potentially-Australian kid asked, almost pleading.
"Sure. Why not." Bertram agreed. Eagerly, Bruce stepped forward and put his hands in the manawater. his mana flooded it, and it quickly flowed out into the air, turning into ribbons that swam through the air. "It's so responsive!" Bruce revealed, eyes wide. His impromptu performance ended when he emptied his waterskin and let the manawater flow inside.
Hmm. Interesting. Maybe I should give some manawater to that Water Spirit, see what they make of it.
The guilders and teen heroes moved down the spiral staircase to the Second Floor, and I let myself defocus, spreading out my consciousness to take in the whole dungeon at once. There wasn't much point watching them go through the Flooded Labyrinth. I had their measure.
They were still early in their journey.
The girl, Sophie, froze when faced with her own death. Bruce only used water tentacles the whole time, and his shield was weak to physical attacks. Akio was the most skilled, and obviously used his enchanted shield to be able to perform two spells at once. Then, Akio ass-pulled a finishing move to kill the boss by hitting it's biggest weak-spot while it was distracted.
Akio was the most experienced, or perhaps the best trained. If they'd been together since they were summoned, having different trainers for each of them only makes sense. I'd keep an eye on them to see how fast they grew. Heroes often have accelerated growth rates in those stories and anime from Earth, there's a chance these three do as well.
Well, If they're going to start delving regularly I need to do another sweep of the dungeon for memes and references. Then I'll do some investigation on the surface. The Holy City had to have a reason for summoning heroes, and I had a feeling it was about the Bahrain. They obviously had something to do with their royal family dying and the kingdom shattering, giving the timing with their invasion. Either way, I didn't think they'd let their summoned heroes just walk about. Where were their trainers? A princess healer or sword saint or someone local planted in their party to keep an eye on them?
Right. Meme time!
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Teleport Tents, Obsidian Beach, Atlantis
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Haythem took a deep breath as he and the rest of the party appeared in the familiar tent outside the dungeon. They were quickly ushered out of the way and healed of any lingering wounds, then interviewed on their delve. Normally for such a short delve Haythem would just give them a 'No visible changes from the norm,' and be on his way. This time, though, he had something interesting to share. Thus, he and Bertram found themselves in front of Guildmistress Losat once again,
"It has music now, and seems interested in those three kids."
"What?"
"During the fight with the First Floor Guardian, Music started playing to accent the fight. It also seemed like the dungeon possessed the Guardian and fought them itself, rather than letting the monster do it. It tested them, and when it had their measure went for a killing blow on the girl. I blocked it, and the kid with the light magic, Akio, got the killing blow in while it was distracted. Why did it wait till now to use the music? Why play music during fights at all?"
Haythem's questions went unanswered.
"Thank you for your time, Haythem, Bertram. About the teens, are you still happy to delve with them for a while? I heard my aunt and uncle are gearing up for another Deep Delve." Bertram and Haythem shared a look; Bertram raised an eyebrow, then Haythem shrug-nodded.
"I don't think we'd mind keeping an eye on them," Bertram answered. "They're good kids, and still have a lot to learn. How's their fourth?"
"Doing well. She's got a Life Mana affinity, and even though I've offered for her to join our Healers, she's insistent on joining her friends in the dungeon."
"Not many healers that actually put themselves in the line of fire," Haythem commented. "Might be nice to have a healer on-hand for once. Any estimates on how long it'll take her to reach Gold?"
Layla hummed. "Probably six months to a year. The main difference between Silver and Gold is in skill, though mana level and body reinforcement plays a part. If she'd dedicated enough, it won't take long."
"Six months is a long time..." Haythem wondered, rubbing his chin. "I have an idea... You'd need to ask the Voice to ask the dungeon, but it might let us start bringing silvers back to the island.
Eyebrow raised high enough to be visible over her blindfold, Layla leaned forward, Star-filled eyes no doubt locked on him. "Oh? Please, share your idea."
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Comments
JAndy
Ooooh, he should definitely play the Dumb Ways to Die melody if he ever overhears the heroes considering something truly stupid!
Foot Toe
Foot
JAndy
> They didn't know that Disney was about to discover how to break through dimensions and sue the dungeon for copyright violations. 😂🤣 😱
Cha0sniper
I can't wait for the kids to meet Spack Jarrow xD *deadpan look* "Really? REALLY?" "Hey, he chose that name himself, it's actually not directly my fault this time."
kp8080
Oh, I do hope we can have a less murdery, more fun experience for people who want it! The meat-grinder should be selectable difficulty and be opt-in only** **By acting like a dickbag, you automatically consent to participating in the meat grinder at a difficulty level inversely proportional to your demonstrated wisdom. Participation in the dungeon under this clause may have negative consequences including but not limited to: pain, extreme pain, suffering, eternal suffering, death, or reanimation as a minion of the Creator or his children. TFTC! Typos: "it's" -> "its" in most of the chapter left and right respectfully -> respectively Boss -> boss (should not be capitalized) Fire leapt from the claws edge -> claw's edge tendrils sharp darkness cutting -> tendrils of sharp out towards it's eyestalks -> out towards its eyestalks
Stranger Danger
They'll get a selection of shanties and pirate bgm
Stranger Danger
I mean, he's a millennial. They're Gen Alpha. It's always gonna feel like that
NoxVerna
I wonder if the music box will join the crabs pirating below on the 11th? I'd like to think so. plus it'd be a good enough reason to add a certain pirate captain with a clawed hand
Purpleninja
"Meme time!" Idk about "meme time", it makes me worried the creator is gonna pull stuff worthy of going on the Wikipedia "internet phenomenon" page https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Internet_phenomena If it's just more movie/game/etc references I'm a little less scared of our dungeon coming off with "How Do You Do, Fellow Kids?" Energy
ReadingButlur
Just one very fast strong and annoying Emu that only follows him during the dungeon can hit can't get close to it but boy does it like sneaking in a pack to the back of his head
Riley Cox
hell yeah! so glad to see our little core finally let loose and have fun! let the memes commence!!!!
Kara Nina
He could create a kiddy cave for younger humans and children still in training to train in together. You know, sparring in safe zones, fights against animals they can beat in different terrain and such so the fear of other races disappears through cooperation in a moderately safe training area.
Adamantplank
Tftc
Robolo42
Give coppers and silvers a dark tower to rise to the top of before getting to the caves. Go up, to go down.
Ripstick 12
“Hows their third?" Fourth?
Docnox
Really pulling for the dungeon to speak to the kids, the sooner they connnect the better everything leading to the eventual conflict with the mainland will be.
Jacob
Also, CONGRATULATIONS! Good job pulling off three weeks in a row! I for one am pumped that there's been so much activity. Keep it up! This stuff is exciting.
Jacob
I LOVE the fact that the kids got the reference. I can't wait for them to get many more.
el trucko
I like to imagine the crab boss is wearing a bowler hat idk why tho
Raptor425
I would like to reiterate my longing for drop bears, cassowaries/emus, and maybe a rogue kangaroo to fuck with Bruce but other than that, thanks for the chapter. I was kind of worried about the isekai'd heroes being annoying when you first introduced them but they've grown on me.
ReadingButlur
"Akio was the most skilled, and obviously used his enchanted shield to be able to perform two spells at once" Oh boy can't wait for him to see our hero talking to his shield look closer then freak out. "Hmm. Interesting. Maybe I should give some manawater to that Water Spirit, see what they make of it." Oh....that's one spicy upgrade
Stranger Danger
This is what it was always meant to be. Pray to The Creator that it continues
Brudog2
That’s what I’ve been thinking lol
Moon Winchester
I feel like he’s at sufficient power now to create multiple lanes of difficulty relating to certain climbers. Possibly creating training dens because after all in every anime and in every Isekai and manga, there is the wise mentor. I believe the creator should create the wise mentor for the dungeon. Possibly a collective consciousness of all knowledge collected about every delver who has ever delve within the dungeon. Masked as an ancient wise figure roaming the dungeon, searching for someone to help reach its depths. A roaming boss. Because every good fucking dungeon story has one cracked fucking roaming boss. Sorry if there’s any errors I was using text to speech and I’m not gonna do any corrections
Michael M
Oh my such regular updates. I might get spoiled
StraylightGrove
Thanks for the chapter!
Prophet of Truth
Thank you for the chapter wordsmith.
Dcs5782
Let's go read this chapter
