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Annoying Avery full comic

🕑 Added 2020-09-30 18:40:33 +0000 UTC

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SmolDegen

I loved the multiple sizes and how tiny the ones in the bus were. The only bit I didn't like was the scat bit. But it's your comic, so you should put what you like in it.

Cool

Nothing wrong at all with working out the kinks! And if it's anything like your art itself, it will only get better and better with time I'm sure. As I said, I look forward to it though man.

fooooly

hmm.. well ive got archived streams on my picarto: https://picarto.tv/fooooly, as for what use. in this comic i used paint tool sai, clip studio and affinity publisher

fooooly

thank you for the feedback, this comic production at many points was a bit of a mess, i added few extra pages to sorta fix it but still i agree its not totally reading as it should. im slowly breaking a mold i used to have for these comics, where i used to think of their only value being pov shots and dialogue. my next few comics will have a better flow im hoping

daKatzman92

Okay, I figured as much, just wasn't 100% on it

My Leg

Man I always love all of your work. I am really interested in your process and what you use. Do you ever plan on or have you already streamed or made videos before?

Cool

I have to echo the story becoming a little muddled sentiment, but the art is too rock solid to be ignored man. That first part especially with the POV of the bus narrowly missing being crushed is just one of my fave views I can remember seeing in a while. It's damn impressive seeing something so massive from that sorta perspective, would love more like it. In any case, I look forward to your next comic as well. I know it's very time consuming but the format definitely let's you show of a lot of your most creative stuff.

Guireyart

Ah yeah I've done the same thing before, so I totally get ya there haha. Love it either way XD

fooooly

thankyou! i see how it gets confusing, i sorta drew this with pictures first and how they linked together was more of an afterthought. its something i want to improve going forward.

fooooly

i understand, i didn't plan ahead on this comic. in the last few pages is a flashback and at the very end, Avery is returned back to her normal size after her flashback. with more planing hopefully my next one will be easier to follow

Guireyart

Awesome job! Really like this comic format, though gotta admit, I was confused a bit story wise in some parts. Didn't really hinder the overall experience though, the bus scene at the end was phenomenal! Hope to see more like this in the future!