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ARI Chapter 1 part 2

🕑 Added 2025-08-01 23:46:42 +0000 UTC

Comments

Negi

I really enjoy it so far. Artwork is exceptional as always. I like the layout it has a good flow to it and it's not difficult to read. I look forward to further explaining the power system and seeing how it is used. Obviously learning more about the mysterious Ari is exciting and I can't wait for the next chapter.

btd 2.0

thanx for the comment^^ it is a bit slower then i thought but just laying down the groundwork so when crazy stuff happens, its not out of nowhere^^; but really, the most important thing for me are the characters and how they interact with each other, and they are more then what they seem the powers will get more explained later in class but will be different then the usual magic people use all the time in anime, no power levels here^^; tired to create their own language and terms so it feels like its own thing without being lost in translation..but i will mess it up^^;

shroudedwolf51

This is a lot more gradual than I was expecting...albeit, I'd argue, it's a benefit, not disadvantage. The idea of the powers seems like a really interesting thing and I'm curious where it'll go. Also, not sure if it's on purpose, but some terms like "sensei" and "kewl" had letters swapped.