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Construction Mage - Chapter 55: Possibility

🕑 Added 2025-07-18 15:35:48 +0000 UTC

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Brian Chrostowski

You’ll want at least a few months to half a year of experience on the first la/t/[y]er before moving on.

mbncd

Malik's name is not mentioned until the 10th paragraph of the chapter. If he's participating in the scene, talking in particular, you should say his name earlier. Yes, you can tell who he is by what he says and if you remember what was happening in the previous chapters, but it should still be explicit. Any new scene should have all relevant characters introduced, even if it's just by something like their role like "his porter". I'd still go for names first and then lesser descriptive terms later to avoid repetition.


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