Comic Chapter 4 Page 1-5

Franky66

Ah! This is really wonderful! I love their interactions and distinct personalities. This even make me more appreciate Freya. I also would be totally sold on commissioning comics pages from you!

Ryner-E

you're welcome Dio, well he does try to keep his fetishes in check.

Ryner-E

hmmmm....

Ryner-E

I try to make it fun and comedic, its just how i like it

Ryner-E

Thanks! every word is worth to hear. and these really help too in improving on my work.

Thatguyknownasdio

Forgot to make one more comment...Jenn just demanding to be tied up...what a dream come true for me! ❤

Thatguyknownasdio

*Sees image of clear reason for tape and rope.* *Immediately concludes that there are broken pipes* Yeah, YEAH, I would come to the same conclusion too! Super sexy as always, Ryner!

Arbiter500

Love the developing [romantic?] tension between Freya and Eric 😤👌

Shadow280

I laughed out loud several times on these pages, very well paced and written! Eric is a likeable character, both for trying to hide his kink and his refusal to get his hopes up. "Isn't that full of tape? Must have a lot of broken pipes." Hilarious

And thus the newest adventure officially begins! The color, lighting and shading add so much to these first 5 pages; from the designs of the characters to their facial expressions, your art looks even more awesome than before (consistent improvement, one sign of a true artist!) Not to mention that Freya looks as great in a tape gag as ever. I dig the little callbacks to previous chapters too, like the one on the first page here (with Eric liking a picture of a tied-up Rebecca). Same goes for Freya choosing microfoam duct tape for "no particular reason" despite the fact that, as of Ch. 2, we know that's not 115% true). Eric is becoming a more intriguing character all the time: his sense of shame about liking bondage is very realistic (despite his photo of Freya and Jen in Ch. 1), and makes the bondage training the girls organize a different challenge altogether for him; will he manage to stay professional, or will he accidentally reveal his secret? Also that online icon of his, nice touch. Is Shore's comment about preferring leather bindings (due to previous experiences with rope and tape), going to be explored in future pages? I wasn't expecting that line, but it'll be interesting to see how that's developed later on, should you choose to do so. Really appreciate your addition of polls and suggestions having an influence on later pages; this worked out great in your last chapter, so I can't wait to see how it turns out for Chapter 4! As for the OC's, I just figured your character sheets on Deviantart were still canon as far as their personalities go. And of course there's the previous chapters for more examples of character quirks. All right this has gone on long enou--

Wordweaver

This is awesome.